Pre-schoolers flying kites
While elders grabbing out their insightful telescopes
beginning to navigate
Everyone looking at a thousand
flashlights
twitching on and off
becoming bigger
smelling like smoked tender cooked meat
with a touch of premium orange juice
bursting in your mouth exploding
Everybody gazing at the,
bright lighted stars
From here it looks so far
People shivering in the cold crispy
air
I guess it’s time to crunch on a
pear
Excellent Poem Anamanu, I like the whimsical style with the rhyme that you include at the end.
ReplyDeleteWow! What a brilliant work Anamanu!
ReplyDeleteThat was an awesome poem you wrote. I love the rhyming sentences in your poem. Well done! Keep up the great work!!